|Reviews for brokenbeyondrepair|
| ionlyhaveeyesforyou chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
It was meant to be that I would find this right now, if this poem was a star it definitely lined up with mine. There's only two things I would change because the rest must be total perfection; the second 'like' in one line and the (Oxy) bit.
I really felt and still feel like drawing eyeliner whiskers on my face after reading only the first four lines.
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
The first line was just a wonderful way to open up the poem. Some of the lines in this piece just blow me away. Likw the line, All this is is saccharine words about amorous lies and sweet seductions." and the entire fourth stanza was amazing. Very well written. Keep up the writing I'd love to read more of your work! :)