Reviews for Unbound Sunset |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE! |
![]() ![]() Ame-chan! This is really fascinating! I've never read anything about wolves before. I like how the story is playing out. It's really interesting - the wolf-like behavior mingled with human traits. I don't know how you do that, it seems really hard! *can't write animals* I like Keagan - he seems like an interesting and somewhat complicated character. I could relate to Kuroji especially in Chapter Four - his mistrust and loneliness. And I really liked the part when Keagan was treating his wounds and warned Kuroji it would hurt, and Kuroji thought, It already does. I know these are your original characters, but that line felt very in character somehow. Haha. I guess I'm not making any sense. This is set in America? I assumed it was Japan, at first. haha. The last line was funny. Overall, it's a nice blend of sweet and angst and what looks like some promising action/adventure. I'm looking forward to more of this story (and your novels). Good work, Ame-chan! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon! I like the story so far. It's plot is interesting though I wish you included more of Kuroji's past in the previous chapters. but, all in all, an interesting story and plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm surprised that this story doesn't have more reviews, I've noticed that on this website. It's so unlike . It's a good story, I wish you'd continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder, was he with family? or was he held against his will? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kuroji needs someone to take care of him. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Kuroji, he must be freaking out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Start of story! |
![]() ![]() Ahh, need to read more! Great work and please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, it sounds interesting. Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story, would like to know where it leads. Keep up the great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG! update ASAP! love it |