Reviews for Dear Felicia
bookgirl07 chapter 48 . 2/21/2011
I started reading this story at 2:00 pm and it is now 5:25 am. this is an awesome story and if you don't update soon then i will die.
bookgirl07 chapter 44 . 2/21/2011
NO! I will not allow this! SHE WILL NOT MARRY HIM!
Lacrymosashadow chapter 48 . 2/20/2011
Great chapter!

Thanks for the update
Killer of MarySues chapter 48 . 2/20/2011
jeeze for the love of god update soon, I've fallen so in love with your story that I kept reading it till 3 in the morning last night. It's absolutely brilliant, the best read I've had in a while.
Xaari chapter 48 . 2/20/2011
Yes lots of hearty dialog between Gregory and Felicia! (*cries at "my wife"*) However, there wasn't enough of really heart-to-heart talk, which I assume will be in store in the next chapter. Please put on your writing cap ASAP and grace us with another chapter! This is more torturous than waiting for new episodes to come out. :p
Magz chapter 48 . 2/20/2011
I wish you would update quicker. I love this story and can't wait for what comes next.
Killer of MarySues chapter 31 . 2/20/2011
we can't really be all that surprised I think every knew that one was going to happen, but it doesn't change the fact that I feel bad for Felicia. Everything horrible always happens to her
Twilightorchid44 chapter 48 . 2/20/2011
Poor Felicia!

Why is she so proud and stubborn still with Gregory after he said that he believes her and wants to see her again?

Will she ever see Michael again?
anne chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I expected them to have a more heated conversation/argument, they both were very 'controlled' but i guess that's what makes them, them.

Nice chapter, thanks for the update.

You would make me VERY, VERY happy if you would update 'The King and the Courtesan' next.

Please try!
Angelxoxo13 chapter 48 . 2/20/2011
Squee! Jump up & down! New chapter! P. Gregory's still smug, cocky and arrogant. And ouch for him saying share a bed, twice! Brilliant progress, hate Maydena. Can't wait to see the next 3 day of them meeting again. Alright Go Read it again, awesome!
Aylia chapter 48 . 2/20/2011
Very, very good job! I liked how she now refused to tell him everything, and how he's torn between being a prince and his feelings.

Fantastic job!
Zuut chapter 47 . 2/19/2011
I had to say, I think all your stories are awesome.

Well okay, just the ones I've read so far. I'll spam the other reviews for those later... sometime.

I have neglected sleep and laundry for your stories, just so you know. And for Dear Felicia, I neglected a combination of both so I could finish it in a day. And then you leave this aggravating cliff hanger.

What makes it worse is I WENT ON YOUR DEVIANART AND I AM TOLD HOW IT ENDS. Or at least, I'm given a very general statement which makes sense based on Felicia's character. This is torture, like, it should actually be illegal. It's not fair at all. I'm probably going to spend all night wondering how this will go on. (Especially since I'm a sucker for Romance . Damn hormones.)

Anyways, I think you had some random typos (like in one chapter while Felicia is at Huxley, it says "Happy ran" or something like that, when it's supposed to be Honey... which was confusing for a total of ten seconds) but otherwise, I think your grammar and spelling are superb. :D

I just have one question, has this seriously been a story you've been working on since you were eleven?
Ioga chapter 47 . 2/6/2011
Hello again! I got myself updated on Felicia's adventures again, and nonsurprisingly liked what I found. (I've been reading Four Kingdoms in the background too, but while the concept of animal-like people syncs just wonderfully with my streak of thinking up people-like animals, the specific characters haven't gripped me equally strongly - it's emotionally easier to occasionally abandon a certain bird-brained princesses to her antics to wander off in some different literary direction. ;) But I'll get to properly reviewing it eventually, when it's done!)

I was worried there for a while that this silly delusion Felicia was entertaining, about returning to the castle to "efficiently hide" from Gregor (in denial, that girl is!), would be entertained by the world until she chose to show herself for this reason or the other. I'm glad it got promptly dispelled. I'm now drooling for the continuation. :)

Minor nitpicks: The text is so clean I keep making bookmarks when I spot typos, to present them to you with a flourish like a cat proudly hauling in a mauled shrew! So, from these two chapters: Page 606/615: "hug didn't lst" - last, and a bit later, "Leslie nearly looked ahead" - merely instead of nearly, perhaps? page 612: "something as clever Elizabeth came from her" (missing the second "as").

Thanks for this!
SimplyAmazed chapter 47 . 2/1/2011
Reunited indeed! I'm glad to see Leslie and Nathaniel have been doing well, and Nicholas. I bet Gregory was the one taking care of him, hehe. :D Speaking of said prince, huzzah! I've been waiting for this moment for a very long time now. This is one of my favorite chapters thus far. Although the chapter ended in a cliffhanger, I absolutely cannot wait until the next one. Amazing writing, as usual.
Spirit of the Shrine chapter 47 . 2/1/2011
And so they meet once again. I love this chapter - so sad but lovely. You are quiet the writer. I can't wait for the next chapter and i can't wait to see how Felicia will react towards her prince...or her former prince, considering that he is now married. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I beg of you...
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