You just couldn't let them be happy and after they got married too T_T it seems like all the good men Felicia meet end up dying. I wish it was the prince instead of Nick, its horrible but its true...

Hmm you're right something about Ellizabeth makes me like her, I really wanted to jump into the story and tear her head off for that racist remark though. But like Felicia I controlledd myself...

;_; how could you do this to me...

Ah I really liked Godwin:(

Sadly, I saw a spoiler in a review for this so I'm well aware that she does not choose Prince Gregory in the end. However, I'm starting to really love him and even though I know how this will end, I think my heart will still be broken when it happens. Lol. Good job so far! Not your typical "elves, dragons, yada yada" fantasy story...but I really like it

I CANT BREATHE LITERALLY WHEN HE RENOUNCED IT THE SECOND TIME I PRETTY MUCH SMIRKED AND STARTED SNICKERING AT ELIZABETH YOU HAVE CALLED THESE EMOTIONS UPON ME WITH YOUR WRITING SKILLS

ohmygod. I love how she looked at the horse first. And how you know horse philosophy . And share Felicia's order of priorities (horse first, boy next).

it might seem like a fun idea to go gallivanting across the globe at 18, but she's going to be the proverbial crazy cat lady, miserable, single and 40. She threw away what most women now really want - marriage to a worthy man. oh well. lovely story up to that point.

i am so upset and depressed i am not even bothering with proper grammar.

i loved the story and hated the endings- sort of like all of Allyson Noels books.

Keep Writing

Blue

I totally do hate you for the ending but I feel it was fitting? This story really was flawless, like perf and I'm sad it's finished for me, wah. Felicia is the best, honestly, she's so bamf but also really vulnerable and flawed (in that endearing way), I like her reluctance to fit the 'norm', it's refreshing and inspirational, honestly I just want to say that this story now means a lot to me, and if you ever do get it published, I'd be on it like a rocket. I just want to thank you for your brilliant mind, dedication and feel privileged that you shared it fictionpress (and in turn me!). xoxo

It's been a little less than a year since this story was completed, but it moved me so much that I needed to write a review for you and thank you for the wonderful story you imparted to your readers and me. I read the whole entire story in almost one sitting, I really tried to and whenever I got home from school I always looked forward to finishing Dear Felicia. But now that I have I feel extremely saddened to having completed the task.

Onto the complete review of your story!

I love Felicia, she's an amazing character who is not only strong, but also weak, and it is in her weakness that I was able to appreciate her more. She ran away from her problems a lot, but she also faced them because she knew that she had to. There were times when I was disappointed and upset with her, but always understood why she did the things she did. For example, Micheal. I really loved his character (and his children) and really wanted Felicia to marry him, but then again with the marriage she would be held back. It's such a hard decision to make. She is the role model that all girls need honestly, and not the ridiculous vampire ones you see today. And her love for horses (or rather yours XD) really rubbed off me. I'd always been dog person (big, giant dogs more like it), but after this story, I've never been more overwhelmed to ride a horse and own one!

Lastly, Gregory (or rather Prince Gregory as he may have corrected me so) was such an amazing yet scornful character. I honestly disliked him, but did not hate him. I knew Felicia would meet him again and that excited me but also worried me, because I have read one too many stories where the girl loses all sense of mind (and intelligence) when she falls in love. You have no idea the joy and tears that I produced when that was NOT the case. His princely state was real, they are supposed to be arrogant and supercilious, thus I really enjoyed his personality and authenticity.

In the end I grieved, but mostly for Prince Gregory. Felicia would find happiness one way or another just like when she was kidnapped; she is so strong I doubt that she could wallow in sadness, not that it is not in her character, just that she has that kind of willpower (but you know her better than I ever will XD). But Prince Gregory on the other hand may not find someone like Felicia ever, or even if he did, he would be too stubborn to even look at her. From what I saw he seems like the type to hold onto things forever (as seen with his treasure box/chest). So even if he let Felicia go, I feel like he will never let go of her memory and live in it. Anyways, you know all of this, I don't need to tell you XD. But I just wanted to share from reader to write how much of a joy it was too see/read your characters and to feel with them and live with them.

Finally, I must praise you for all of the work you put into this story even if its been awhile. I'm so glad you kept this up and not removed it like so many authors do when their story gets popular or plagiarized (though I shouldn't blame them), because now I have such dear inspirations from your characters and you the writer. Your vocabulary was splendid that I had to even spend some time with my dear friend Dictionary, not that she minded though. Through her I was able to understand the beauty in your words. What you convey to your reader was absolutely magical and never have I been so connected and attached to a story, some have come close, but not as much as your story. I think for me it has to do with your ending, which was sad, but necessary. I wanted her to be with Prince Gregory, but I wanted her to be free because that is what she always wanted. Freedom I feel was the right choice, no other thing would have been better for Felicia. It truly showed her strength and desire for self fulfillment at that moment.

You must be tired of reading my tediously long review, so I'll end it here. Don't worry about replying or anything :) I understand that you may never see this review, I just wanted to impart some words here before I completely came into terms that it is done and that I must move on (I'm quite sad about that). I thank you again for this wonderful story again and leave you with adieu!

Lisa2559

Please please please tell me you have sequel to this one I completely loved Dear Felicia. Beside ending the story like that is just cruel of you. i NEED to know what happens!

Oh my word. I love this story, as depressing as the ending is. I really hoped she would end up with Gregory, but oh well, it was still good anyways. Why aren't you writing as sequel? DDDDD: It's like SO GOOD. I can never write a sequel in my head as good as this. Or you don't have to write a sequel; you could write a small epilogue or *something* PLEASE. I love this story.

This was a most amazing/fantastic story and it took me through a rollercoster of emotions. There were certainly some cliches but the writing made up for all of it. I pity Greggory so much though, that poor, poor man.

This story was fantastic and you deserve all the praise in the world that I can give to you,

Rain

Towards the end, you called Gregory “Priness Gregory.“ You might want to fix that. ;)