Reviews for Dear Felicia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YES! GO Felicia! :D oh i hope there is more to this prince than just being stuck-up and arrogant and..well..a prince! Hopefully Felicia will be able to find some sort of good in this horrible situation! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Felicia survived her first ball! I see that she held herself back a bit when talking to Gregory, but hopefully she'll unleash her intellectual goodness on him one day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The conversation between Felicia and the prince is fun and witty. Hope to see more of Felicia's interactions with the siblings. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! Brilliant! I loved it XD MORE please! Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah...really love your story, but Felicia's free spirit seemed to be confined, I hope she would not be be losing her greatness, dreams, and her independant mind, it would make her lesser a heroine. Elizabeth is an interesting character! Hope to see more of her tatics Pls update soon! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought my morning routine was bad, but woah, the Princess took it to the next level! That must've been expected for that time, but the one thing that made me cringe was the plucking of the neck and temple hairs (ouch)! I get the feeling that's there a lot more to Elizabeth's character than her vanity, which will be interesting to see. It also saddens me to see a submissive Felicia, I hope that along the way she releases that spice she has! And where is the Prince, hm? Cheers to you for another good chapter:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh. I just love what you have written. I always get so excited when the email tells me you have written another chapter! Brilliant, once again. More! More is wanted XD Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Poor Felicia! But i guess this is slightly better than being a slave maybe? Leslie's gonna be so shocked when she gets back! |
![]() ![]() I like how you create those conflicts (Leslie and Nick's impossible love, Melinda's jealousy, feminity and knights, etc.). They really hook people on to the story, but may i suggest that you introduce these conflicts earlier in the stories, so that people do not get too bored in the first few chapters. however, the conflicts are captivating enough. good job is not even enough to praise your story. It is honestly well-mapped. I wonder why you don't try to publish this story into a book/novel, if you will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy, ok Felicia, turn that royal world upside down! I just hope her makeover and new poistion don't go to her head, but I have a feeling she won't be a mini-Elizabeth:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVE YOUR STORY, detailed, long, and awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a good story!I dont understand why it has such a small number of reviews? I really should be studing for my spanish test tommorow but eh who cares?XD And is this story gonna be like a sad ending or is is Felicia gonna be FREE! *You can tell me i wont tell anybody. * |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still love it! Is Felicia going to get with Prince Gregory? (I'm just petty really, the main character has to get with a prince) Oh well. As always brilliantly written; just sucks me in! Post more soon! Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, as usual:) But I'm a little confused...is this Prince the same prince at the festival when Felicia was a little younger? |
![]() ![]() this is a good story so far, captivating enough. I really wonder how you came out with all those minor details that actually make the story more realistic...mind to share? The story may be a bit too wordy, probably u can cut down on unnecessary details. Otherwise, a good beginning to captivate readers! |