Reviews for Dear Felicia
Edara chapter 4 . 7/6/2009
More, More, More! This is so (plus a whole lot more o's) good! The way you have written it, the use of different words that I normally don't (which I have even looked up the meaning a couple times) has made this story even better.

Please, Please, Please, Please write more!

Typhaegia chapter 4 . 7/5/2009
Yeah Felicia! Put that Prince and knights to shame! Felicia is growing on me, I'd love to see where you're taking her with this story! Hope your summer is going well)
Bizz Sleeps on Clouds chapter 1 . 6/29/2009

I'm sleepy and very floaty, and actually this is the second story out of a bunch of others that I've actually found splendid enough to read through the first chapter and actually, despite my inferiority complex, review. O: I must say that I fervently adore your word choice, and the fact that you really do look like you know what you're writing about. I surmised that maybe if I could read enough the inferior feeling I'm being pelted with will eventually drown in the ideas and I can keep reading and finally write something of my own that I am at least remotely satisfied with; I'm actually currently planning something maybe vaguely interesting, so we'll see? c:?

Anyways, wow, thanks very muchly for the good read. I will continue to read the rest you have up and posted, and I desire to see more of your works in the future. c: I hear from your profile that you are a rather frequent updater? That is very good, because one time I was crushed under the weight of suspense for almost a month or two! And ow, that isn't fun sometimes.
Leeverbones chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
I finally finished this chapter! (i had started reading it last week but then i got distracted by other things)

I like it already!

Felicia is an underdog. But she's gonna be the best underdog ever. :3

And Nicholas. Oh...m...gee! I like him. Most guys should be like him. xD
Typhaegia chapter 2 . 6/11/2009
I think Felicia's love for horses is totally cool. Horses are pretty interesting creatures. I just never realized how many different terms there are for them lol

I'm excited for this royal festival coming up. Maybe Felicia will catch the eye of a knight, but preferably a prince hehe
Typhaegia chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
New story? I'm excited! I love how your stories are not the cliche "happily ever after" kinda stuff as you mentioned. It makes them entertaining to read because I dunno what to expect. Surprises are good lol

I get the feeling that a love triangle between Felicia-Nicholas-Leslie is developing. I'm def sticking around to find out!
Twilightorchid44 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Well, like all your stories i love this one as well..

Poor Leslie. She sounds like an amazing woman to know. I hope she's in the story a lot more because she just sounds like so much fun.

i'm sorry i haven't been reviewing on your other stories as always update so many chapters and i'm horrible at reviewing haha

but know that i'm still a loyal reader and an occasional reviewer. I will try moreso to review

Can't wait to read more!

P.S. I think i'm in love with Nocholas too :P
Jubileyn chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
See, just as I'm asking myself, "What can I read now?" (I've basically reread all the books on my shelves in my four weeks offa school), you post Dear Felicia. I love this story, and I GLADLY read it again! :D

I adore the opening. It is so hard to get the beginning of a story to just fit-or at least it is for me-so I appreciate the beauty of a well-turned phrase, or in this case a super opening. I remember when first reading this that I was immediately hooked (I did read it all of it in two days because it was JUST that awesome). I don't really think it's too wordy (possibly because I'M too wordy-as I've been told-but OH well).

Lol, NICHOLAS! I'd forgotten how much I love that man. Seriously.

As for Felicia, she is definitely the ultimate heroine. So many stories-TOO many stories-end in a terribly cliche way, with no real sacrifice or climax. My ultimate heroines, the ones I look up to, are the women who climb through a life full of rejection, abuse, and real gut-wrenching sorrow and still manage to have kind hearts and a real sense of self. So, needless to say, I love Felicia. :D
xxxxxxxxxxx chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
This is really good! There's nothing major wrong with the story, only a few typos. For example:

When Happy takes Felicia into the kitchen to meet the servants, she introduces her to Leslie, but nowhere else before that does Felicia tell anyone her name.

Also, this sentence doesn't make sense: 'I didn’t even to count how many times to fold the pliable dough. . .'

And you're right about the wordiness. But it's interesting enough for me to want to keep reading. Update soon!
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