|Reviews for like the deepest pits of Erebus|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Wow, this is so beautiful. My favorite is the third stanza, just everything about it is so perfect. I would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
| pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I like this. Good work (:
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Your opening and closing stanzas were very strong.
I have to say that the middle lost me just a bit in terms of narration, although overall I really enjoyed the piece. Keep up the good work.