Reviews for The Dark Forest
GGGGGGG chapter 16 . 8/23/2009
hmm perhaps the chapter you named dragon hunting that got replaced by the first chapter is actually supposed to be about hunting dragons
GGGGGGG chapter 15 . 8/23/2009
wow can't wait for the next chapter
GGGGGGG chapter 14 . 8/22/2009
i like stone wolf you better not kill off stone wolf
GGGGGGG chapter 13 . 8/22/2009
didn't you already write this chapter
GGGGGGG chapter 12 . 8/22/2009
i don't think i'll review this chapter

oh well there goes that idea
GGGGGGG chapter 11 . 8/22/2009
another good chapter you do a fantastic job on giving cliffhangers at the end of each chapter which will motivate readers to read on
GGGGGGG chapter 10 . 8/22/2009
i still really enjoy your chapters and characters i really like the way you added a necromancer i LOVE necromancers
GGGGGGG chapter 9 . 8/22/2009
alright explaination chapter it wasen't boreing and was good which is very hard to do with an explaination chapter
GGGGGGG chapter 8 . 8/22/2009
either this is realy long or your intro is bleeding into your

GGGGGGG chapter 7 . 8/22/2009
another cool chapter i like the story so far but sorry to be repettive like i have been almost constantly but there ain't too much to comment on exept for your story which is great
GGGGGGG chapter 6 . 8/21/2009
well now the dwarf's dead and vampire number 2 is nowhere to be seen there had better be a chapter on him soon

other than that i have no comment
GGGGGGG chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
i love this chapter and i think that this story is without a doubt one of the bes i've ever read (including ones done by professional authors)
GGGGGGG chapter 4 . 8/21/2009
oh this story is wickid and funky and has a massively sizemic proportion of promise and would also make a great computer game
GGGGGGG chapter 3 . 8/21/2009
hey the story just developed a line and POW it's in my favorites
GGGGGGG chapter 2 . 8/21/2009
this story was cool too but i did like john and was a little sad he died and it's kind of annoying that the story is about the vampire but you write as other people
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