Reviews for The Dark Forest
GGGGGGG chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
oh cool this story is FANTASTIC! i love it you are a great writer go you!
Theodore C. Coolidge chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
AND THEN EVERYBODY DIED, ALL OF THE SUDDEN BY A GIANT ROCK. THE END… UNTIL NEXT TIME READERS! (Pay no attention to this)

That sentece ruined my reading. This isn't .
Big and Mighty chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I was really enjoying the story unitl the whole "AND THEN EVERYBODY DIED, ALL OF THE SUDDEN BY A GIANT ROCK. THE END… UNTIL NEXT TIME READERS! (Pay no attention to this)". After that I was annoyed and just skimmed the rest. If you want to attract readers I would suggest not putting things like that in the middle of a fight scene.
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