Please update this soon. This is wonderful.

Yay you're back! It's strange because a few days ago I was thinking about you and The Personal Drink and now you're back :) btw I used to have a different username, but I completely forgot my login details so signed up again.

Looking forward to seeing how things progress with Ellen and Josef, and what the council decides.

I thought this was a lost and forgotten story, imagine my surprise...but I'm looking forward to new instalments! please keep posting :)

Omg this story is amazing! Plz update soon!

Wow, I thought the original was pretty good. But this really good. I love Ellen, she's adorable. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Aw! That was cute! But she shouldn't have disrespected him like that! I expected him to lash out at her! But hey! If you can get away with it! Update soon!

That was a great chapter. It was well written, I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors. It was a good chapter, seeing her learn a bit more of the colony and what surrounds it. She gets to go the the Pack's festivities and partake in Daniel's coming of age ceremony by being his dance partner. Then we see her stand up to Josef and be more perceptive than some might at the way he acts. It was a fantastic chapter, keep up the great writing. I look forward to reading the next update.

This story is so cool! I love it! The plot is so interesting and exciting and the characters are so unique!Keep writting, I'm interested to see how it ends. And will there be a sequal?

I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your work (I read thru The Personal Drink & thoroughly loved it!) & I look forward to all that is to come with this story! )

La di da... UPDATE.

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That is all.

AwKwArD :) I don't really like supernatural stories but this...this is really good and I realy like it

Update soon, mmkay?

That was a great chapter. It was well written, I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors in the chapter. It was an intense chapter, with the fate of Ellen hanging in the balance. She was allowed to live, but still has to wait on the other decision of her staying forever, or getting to go home. It was sad when she found out about Aaric having befriending her as a mission. She never really had friends, and her first one was shrouded with deceit. Thankfully they moved beyond it and are friends again. Keep up the great writing, I can't wait to read the next update.

especially since the sexual tension seems to be rolling between josef and her...

Great Chapter!

keep writing :)

That was a good chapter. It was well written, I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors. It was interesting, we see more of Josef, learn about this vampire community, and find out a few things and soon we will see what happens when she meets this council. It was a good chapter, it was nice to see Aaric kind to Ellen, and Josef has an interesting personality that you wrote well. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the good writing.