Reviews for Young Love
Belly boo1099 chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
omg that was so cute and romantic!
DofD chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Yay! Major yey!
Theorise chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
natmarie chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
I say YAY. It's an adorable concept and a neat twist on the whole thing. The little scenes and flash backs really add to it. The only thing I would reccomend is trying to read it out loud for some flow...sometimes you use a name where a he or she might help flow better, or you repeat words in back to back lines. But overall well done. I think you could even flesh it out into a more detailed piece with maybe some more descriptin or dialogue.
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Made me smile. Deffs a yay!
found.eventually chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
I cant believe I haven't read this before. I'm getting goosebumps. They're that good. You're amazing you knnow that? :)
KindaAwkward chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Pretty Cute, but I want the encounter of the young love!
Mushypork chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
aw that was beautiful (:
IcyEyes chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Haha i like this, it was short and sweet.
flunkybubbleshorts chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Yay yay yay! :P

It was very well written. No excesses. (so necessary to a one-shot)

did i say yay?

toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
aw, perfect place to stop :)

i loved the simplicity, too. :D

very cute!
Godsmusician93 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I loved the story! It's very well written! I hope you win, or already won, the award!
glitter.fingers chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
First of all, I love Regina Spektor's The Call, my heart was practically melting when I first heard it on the second Narnia movie.

Your story was undeniably sweet. And you've done a great job executing the challenge response.

The only thing though, was that I felt it was too short. I dunno, maybe it's just me, but I love it anyway.

I'll vote for you on SKOW. (promise!)


Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
This was cute ) I think if you'd left off that last bit, though, this piece would have been stronger. But overall, this was good.

aku-md chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
A definite yay! :) utterly sweet! love it! It reminded me of a manga I once read where the MC also had showcased a painting of the girl he's in love with :) Nice job again!
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