omg that was so cute and romantic!

Yay! Major yey!

YOU!

I say YAY. It's an adorable concept and a neat twist on the whole thing. The little scenes and flash backs really add to it. The only thing I would reccomend is trying to read it out loud for some flow...sometimes you use a name where a he or she might help flow better, or you repeat words in back to back lines. But overall well done. I think you could even flesh it out into a more detailed piece with maybe some more descriptin or dialogue.

Made me smile. Deffs a yay!

I cant believe I haven't read this before. I'm getting goosebumps. They're that good. You're amazing you knnow that? :)

Pretty Cute, but I want the encounter of the young love!

aw that was beautiful (:

Haha i like this, it was short and sweet.

Yay yay yay! :P

It was very well written. No excesses. (so necessary to a one-shot)

did i say yay?

Sukanya

aw, perfect place to stop :)

i loved the simplicity, too. :D

very cute!

I loved the story! It's very well written! I hope you win, or already won, the award!

First of all, I love Regina Spektor's The Call, my heart was practically melting when I first heard it on the second Narnia movie.

Your story was undeniably sweet. And you've done a great job executing the challenge response.

The only thing though, was that I felt it was too short. I dunno, maybe it's just me, but I love it anyway.

I'll vote for you on SKOW. (promise!)

-hugs-

Fleur

This was cute ) I think if you'd left off that last bit, though, this piece would have been stronger. But overall, this was good.

-Steph

A definite yay! :) utterly sweet! love it! It reminded me of a manga I once read where the MC also had showcased a painting of the girl he's in love with :) Nice job again!