I came here straight from matched and i kinda liked Carter so seeing a story about him was wonderful. I was a bit sad that he wasent the first but i still loved the story.

The heat between them :D

Hadrian coming like that...he seems so confident in winning.

The legend of the first werewolf...poor lovers. And she thinks he's the one the legend speaks of!

I've read your story in one go and it was so wonderful. It had everything a reader should want. I kept telling myself I'd review after reading another chapter, and it would be so captivating that I'd delay again...ups, but your story is just too good to stop.

But your hard work and you sharing it with us should always be appreciated by us, readers, with reviews at the very least.
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I was so intrigued by those memories!

nice

oh now the cops come

great job

Very lovely : )

Smooth writing, with just a few typos here and there. Loved the characters and the intricate plot. I'm interested in this non-existent city in your universe. If you haven't done so already, I'd be very interested in reading any future stories you might write that take place there, perhaps centering on different characters, though.

Thanks for posting, I thoroughly enjoyed the read!

Wow this really good story thanks for writing it

Epic story, plus the fact that you created a setting and whole other world, is very impressive, hell I'm very impressed with the quality of story you've managed to write! Keep up the good work!

Okay, I liked this story. Thought it was pretty good. I read Matched first though. I like both of these stories, but I had a little problem when the scenes changed without notice. Just adding a few *** or dashes, regular line or something would have been helpful because it was a little confusing at times. Other than that, I thought the writing was pretty good and didn't really notice much that could be improved too much.

I really liked the story. You had a great plot and I do like how much work you put into your characters. I felt a little something for everyone of your charcters even Hadrian and the shadows lol. Can't wait to see what other story you come up with

This was such a heart felt story and I really loved the twists and turns in it. I thought that Hadrian was a great character, one of my favourites in the story (I know he's evil and all). Thank you.

Loved it. The ending was not what I had expected, but deeply satisfying. Nice writing and awesome plot.