I wasn't going to review untill I was finshed reading wht you have posted but,I just had to. lol

I love this!

I'm reading it while I'm supposed to be paying attention in science class. lol

I too die dramaticly at the end of snowball fights :D

This story had anlot of drama in it but I love it :D

Keep it up!

They're so screwed...

This story sounds intresting, deffinatly goignt to comtinue reading.

I should hope I wouldn't fall for that. I could never take all that demand crap. Would of dated one of the groupies.

Lol, I would just jump from my roof. It's a ten foot drop, no big deal. Anyway, good chapter!

Yay for nothing bad happening! Your story needed a break like you said.

I've had stitches in the lip before, it really sucked. I would of said the same thing to the doctor by the way, what a loser. Good chapter.

So he beat him within an inch of his life, then he gos to tell on his self? Not much to comment on, except a broken rib would leave him on the floor.

Great story!

can't wait for more

So is this your first time killing off a character? Good job with the writing.

That was kinda random, but this is going to mess up the whole I have to only eat a certain amount thing so I can stay in my weight category ain't it.

Hehe, Esel zu treten!

Made me laugh.

Ti amo! Quello era stupefacente. Can' aspettare di t più.

[[I love you! That was amazing. Can't wait for more.]]

The first bits I knew because my ex is italian... The last bit I searched so it may be wrong...

Okay, I'm over it, you can stop bringing it up now. Wow, dark chapter. It's time to switch point of view again though.

Denial's a bitch,

Reviews are shiny!

Nice.

I like this chapter a lot, but I think it would be funner/more fun for Cartier to beat him up. Just saying. :)

I WANT MORE

I fucking love this story.

And here I was worried it was gunna be over now they're together.