Reviews for Sex, Drugs, Lies and Cliques |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg hun, so cute! Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you run this through spell check? No, I didn't see that coming. I don't think anyone did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, but maybe you should add that last bit to your profile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was fast. I find it interesting that you use stuff from our everyday lives and add them to our stories. So he's a Rager, huh, I kinda guessed. I think its time to change the point of view again to someone else if your still going with this high-school moves fast plot. You can't stay on one person for too long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll clarify in the beginning for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well where do I start... I hate you for making Cartier a prick. I'm glad Sam likes her enough to get jealous. And woah, Estelle? Awesome name. Lulu. |
![]() ![]() Lol. Had To. Anyways Ima Log In And Review Now. XoLuluoX |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what a prick. What's my problem? Or his problem. Why is he suddenly the bad guy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() the title is actually one big typo. i was listening to a panic at the disco CD, and the song that is the chapter title is the song AFTER the song that i was listening to when i wrote it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, how does the title apply? Well written, I didn't know you could write stuff like that...I'm not sure I wanted to know... |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's great hun. The descriptions were good and you told us exactly what he was thinking and feeling. I felt like I was there AND could read his mind. Perfect. Keep up the good work. Lulu. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wicked! Update soon! I love it! :):) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was Harsh. It'll mean payback of course...maybe I should start writing down your rants. They might make an half interesting story... Your story needs conflict. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE SOON! I LOVE IT! OMG! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1. Cool! Cloaks and daggers! This I like. 2. Spandex? Really? What the hell were you thinking? That I'd look sexy in them or something? |