Reviews for Flaming in the Dorms |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi the story is really very good. I read the whole night. Cant wait to know how things with steven ends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit of an overuse of exclamation points. Dialog is also a little weak in points. Other than that, though, pretty good :) |
![]() ![]() right... half way review: damn it's a good story... all the drama and love and damn all the drama... and let's not forget the smexing;) but J H Christ all the F words are seriously starting to get on my nerves... not that F words are a no go for me or offending (if they were I wouldn't be reading this), not at all... they are just freaking annoying when they appear in every freaking sentence... at least twice... just though I'd let you know... excitedly onwards to the next chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. Are you goning to update this? I'm hooked on the story so if you would that'd be great.I absolutely love Damien. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() more! damn you for getting me addicted to this. |
![]() ![]() I want Ryan and James to get together! |
![]() ![]() just to let you know. I FUCKING NEW something was up with Granny and Mary on the day Scott and Dae arrived and they were having lunch. but it still surprised and cracked me up though. |
![]() ![]() H.O.L.Y F.U.C.K.!. ahahhahahha oh man, i freakin' LOVE Damien! you're amazing you know that? i can't stop reading this. I've got exams in a week and instead i'm reading this at 2 in the fucking morning! bro, you got me addicted to this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! So I realize you havdnt updated this story in years, and don't know if you even use this anymore, but just wanted to say that this story was really great and its a shame you never finished it. I just finished rereading it and although there are a few grammar errors the plot and characters are just perfect (not to mention the sex scenes were hot as fuckk) Anyway just thought I'd let you know (: haha book-geek |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG you have got to continue you cannot leave it hanging like that Please say you are not dropping the story pleeeese. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! |
![]() ![]() I really like the story so far, but in this chapter you once named Charles "Prewitt" and once "Prescott"... |
![]() ![]() ![]() More please! I'm hooked! Can't wait for Scott to wake up and realize who Steven really is! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your stories and am dying to know what's gonna happen with Damien and Scott, please update soon :-) |