What a lovely poem! You certainly portrayed the troubles of the relationship and the hardship of letting go very well. The fact that I can relate also made your poem that much more enjoyable. Thanks for the share.

This poem is light but is extremely deep with emotion and love. I'm not particulary keen to writing with a rhyme scheme but you do it rather well and balance a good story all together. First rate poem for sure. You should try the same concept but with the open verse. I think I'll def improve your poetry skills. Keep writing.

Aw, that's really sweet :)

I'm not too crazy about the flow of it though, it seemed a little forced at spots, but the idea and concept was really good and I loved it!

xkatt