Reviews for Like Wax
pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Very well written. I love it.

cab fed hig chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
i don't like the use of the word 'supremely'-

it doesn't seem to fit with the romantic mood of the poem for me.

but, i love the separation of 'candelight' and then, the simple, but powerful simile at the end.

great work !