Reviews for Glass
bumble whale chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
This one is great. I feel like you write about how I feel. I like the line about if you're not doing anything better, I feel like that's how things are going with me. I really like this one :)
Isca chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Christ, the pain and longing in this poem is so emotionally devastating. The speaker is so meek, and yet look at how profound their love is at the end, since they're willing to bleed to death just to spend a few moments with their lover. It's relatable, yet unique and realistic. Excellent work! :D