I realy hope you'll continue this story, I like what I have see so far and it will be realy sad to stop here.

I hope you'll continue this story because it's look like a great idea

I have to say that I love the premise which is different from the usually stories I have come across. I like what you have written so far and I hope that you update in the near future.

god, Jake's such an ass.

cant wait till Alison sees her sister again.

thankx for updating, hope you can do it again really soon!

Great story so far - glad to see the update. Only suggestion I have so far is in the editing & layout. You do a good job remembering to let us know you are changing POV...but it still reads a little stilted and choppy in the transitions. Not to say it isn't a good read - just trying to help.

good story so far, what happened to your other story Unveiled i really liked that one too

I guess I'm behind on this story, I didn't know you had another one! Their does seem to be more of a direction in this one, though their is a lot going on aleady. It has a good balance of mystery and adventure so far. Even though their hasn't been as much about Alison's character or situation yet, I think I'm more drawn to her part in the story. Maybe their is more potential conflict there? More of a sense of unknown? I'm not sure why. The location got me hooked as well - I hope to move to Colorado at some point. If I can afford it, transfer and go to school their. Just gotta do my time at community college and save up!

I like this, a different take on a werewolf story. can't wait for the next chapter.

I really like this story- especially the characters. I hope you continue it! You're an amazing writer!

~Ever~

Wow, this is really interesting. The characters are intriguing and you've set up the suspense really well. I hope to see an update in the future.

i'm eager to see what happens when Alison meets Orren.

Nice start, I'm interested. Please write some more!

hmm...something different. i like it so far, n would like to read more.