| Reviews for Undiscovered |
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   Emilea chapter 2 . 6/9/2009 AH I LOVE THIS STORY so much already. more more more |
| alineofprose chapter 2 . 6/9/2009 Personally, I love the fact you had to update asap. It makes my day better finding something worthwhile to procrastinate upon. Last review I said it intrigued me. This review, I say that you have me: hook, line and sinker. It's at the "let's read it 3 times because I can't get enough of it" stage. Originally, I would think it rather typical for her to go all screechy on Adrian after the one night stand. but the thing is - it fits completely, simply because I can envision Noelle as the quiet nerd - with a bite. Her boss is a pervy sleazebag (albeilt, a "nice" one) that should get demoted. *glares* I think I've found my own weakness. Although, I haven't yet decided whether it's the story itself or Adrian. That will be deliberated upon. I love the fact that no matter how many times I try to choose education over Fictionpress, FP always wins. Like last night. And Tonight. And probably tomorrow night. That said, I should be a little more worried when 20% of my grade is at stake. Le sigh. Personally, I wish FP was a subject. xP You've finished on a tiny cliffhanger and now I'm rather keen for the next chapter. Such indecencies should be illegal! I.e.: please keep writing! |
| Alenor chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 good prologue, can't wait to see what happens next ~ Alenor |
| alineofprose chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 You've intrigued me already! I can't wait to see where you go with this - especially if Adrian has changed since highschool or whether he's the same stuck up prat with a girly reaction to being found in bed with her. Or if he doesn't remember her at all... And I second what you've said on your author page. It's so frustrating! Well, I better get back to studying (exam in... 2 hours), but otherwise, good luck and keep writing! |
| Ms.Romantic chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 this makes me excited |
| TheInsideGirl chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 The prologue is short but sweet, has left me wanting to read more and introduced the story nicely. Also, this is a weird comment, I know, but I like your use of dashes. I kind of have a thing about them. Plus, you use great words such as 'toggled'. And 'pesky'. Poppy sounds like a cool character too. No typos, grammar errors and the like and I can already tell I'm going to like you're writing style. Yay for the popular/unpopular cliche. I'm awaiting more. x |