|Reviews for Mon Hantise Profonde: My deep obsession|
| Swirlgurl chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
So when is ch. 2 coming?
| S.A chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Wow , he actually sounded attractive (cough) for a second there you scared me, i though he was going to get raped or something! anywho this is REALLLY GOOOOOOD UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
| Carzilla888 chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
You must finish this, not an option you must. this is too good to just let it go like this whatever you must do to get this done get it done I'm thoroughly obsessed with this story he seems so adorable and it's really lovely. GET ER DONE
| Smartgirl94 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
this is really good, Please update soon :D
| Xoder chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Needs to be placed in paragraph. I like this story.
| Fannie chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
I like the story, please continued.
| TwentyOneDreams chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Keep on writing! This chapter was amazing you definitely have a great talent!:)
| BagLadee chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
MORE MORE MORE don't leave us hanging...PS suggestion: separate into smaller paragraphs...its a little hard to read
| AlfortJen chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
What a great start.
| G4U15 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
You know honey I really love this story,I could tell this one is going to be a hit.)
| Bazooka Joy chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Hey, welcome to FP. This isn't a bad start, fairly decent. I did notice though that it's easier to read if you put your dialogue into separate paragraphs though instead of bunched up together. Easier to tell who exactly is speaking and when. But that's my only nitpick. Don't let it discourage you!