Reviews for Thirty Seconds on a Traffic Light
Mystery Critic chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
I really like the poem and the syntax is compelling and beautiful! It has so much meaning in it and I assure you that it is a wonderful poem that has so much in it to describe and talk about. I think you are a most brilliant writer and I hope you keep writing! I also like your word choice and the imagery is magnificent.
ZucchiniSpook chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
I really love this. Especially the part:

And if I fall,” she shrugs, “So be it.

I’ll remember when I was a shooting star.”

You have such a knack for stringing beautiful words together to create a vivid picture.