You know, I think this story could stand alone as a whole different story. Her personality in this one is more meek; she's more submissive. Her brother likes her in this one, she's unique but, not as unique as in the other story, the plot is comepletely different, and most of the characters that appear in this story has different personalities.

And GOSH! I hope u haven't abandoned these stories! It'll break my heart!

This chapter was SOOOOOOOO FUNNY! I was hella cracking up by myself at midnight! I'm not laughing at special people but, the IDEA of her pretending and WILLING to do that just so the male figures in her life could get girls was just TOO out of this world FUCKING HILARIOUS!

haha lovee.

i liked the last one too, but i cant decide which one i prefer. that one was pretty awesome in all its craziness, but it was pretty confusing,or maybe that just me. :p

you updated so fast back in 09 and then suddenly.. *poof!* where'd ya go?

update soon if you remember your fictionpress account, please :)

YUM. i love any forms of sexual activities unless it involves fetishes and anal-anything :D

ahahaha "I was a fool" lol. She was indeed a FO! :D but a good FO 'cause it got her yummy Uni-boy's kisses ;)

this is super awesome, and although i think the first version was waayy funnier, the overall story of this one is much better and it flows much nicer too! [to be honest, I didn't like those How to be a rebel thingy chapter's... they seemed out of place and kinda stupid, and I felt like they were somehow going to come in at some point so I read them and then found it was a waste of time so... :D YAY for no more Rebel pamphlet chapters!]

Love this! Hopefully you decide to continue sometime soon in the near future! :D

xX QQ

this is funny and tragically overlooked (or at least tragically unreviewed) :)

I just sat down and reread this whole story and I have to say it's just as amusing as the first time I read it. There were some parts that didn't read as smoothly as I remembered but I still literally lol'd even though I knew what was happening with some parts.

I also picked up, a lot clearer this time, the competition with the brothers. It was there before, obviously, but second read through it feels like Track is going after Adelaide partly because Court likes her. BUT would Court be that interested in her if Track didn't seem to be showing an interest in her? They both seem to like her but since they only really met her for one weekend in which she seemed keen on annihilating her face, the fact that they mainly show interest in her it seems to be a to get a reaction out of the other or in reaction to what one of them did.

And poor Adelaide seems overwhelmed, lol, which I think is realistic since before this point no one paid her any attention at all.

I am totally in love with this story. No, I'm serious. If it was possible to have a love affair with a story, it'd be this one. It had me in tears one minute and fits of laughter the next. I can't remember the last story or book to do that to me. I am really looking forward to reading more, if you plan on writing more that is. I hope that answer will be yes. Thank you for writing this. It is AWESOME.

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HI! Love this story, Your really a great writer.

Although, the other version you had up was like 10x's funnier.

Where you trying to go more on the serious side or something with the new version?

I hope you update soon.

-Later an all that jazz.-

This is like a blend of Hiring a Hooligan and Sweet Little Lies...I'm loving it.

Hehe, which one is she going to choose?

Court. Duh! Great story, love it.

Loved this for so long. I remember reading the original a couple of years back and it was one of my favorite FP stories ever! Glad to see that you're continuing it after all this time. :)

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

Can't wait to find out if it's Track or Court! Methinks it's Track because she likes his touch, whereas she only likes Court's voice.

Anyhoo, since it's my first time reviewing I'll give you my overall impressions

1) I like that the characters are quirky/crazy

2) I like that the main character sees life differently from everybody else and is somewhat innocent as opposed to being jaded

3) I'm worried that the craziness thus far will devolve into a plot-less mess of clever thoughts and phrases (they are clever, but i like plots, too :))

4) I LOVE that this is not a story about the high school social hierarchy, at least not a blatant story about it

5) It seems weird that college boys are so interested in hanging out with a high school girl, especially such an ODD one, hopefully you clear that oddity up somewhere in the story.

Anyway, those are my immediate impressions, I'm looking forward to reading more!

I really enjoyed this first chapter! Original setting.