Reviews for A Tragic Little Mermaid
Ebonique Rose chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Really good and well written! I like the use of difficult vocabulary, it sets this story apart from the rest of the stories here! Although, I feel that you should limit the number of difficult words per paragrah, so as to not overwhelm the reader. I like the style of the story as well, and the ending is certainly a twist I didn't really expect! If you don't get an A for this, switch teachers. Keep up the good work and write more good stories!
Celestial Songbird chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Lovely,lovely,lovely dahling. My favourite line: "I prepare to lash both men with my mighty tongue." I liked the switch between memory and the present. 'Twas great, as was the use of the least popular words in the dictionary. Poor mermaid, she had no idea that the prince was gay. XD Loved it.


Celestial Songbird