Reviews for The Games that Play Us
Izzyswims chapter 19 . 4/11/2011
You did an amazing job of portraying a guys point of view. It must have been fun trying to get in his head.
Sakurachibi08 chapter 8 . 11/10/2010
right now Adelaide is being really, really horrible. i wish she would just forgive him.
charmedblush chapter 18 . 10/25/2010
so much love for this story...i lub it i lub it i lub it.. I love andrew and ade...i love all your characters...'cept the dad - he's a jerk...but anyway I LOVE THIS STORY! U R AWESOME
Shiro-chan-and-Momo chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
Love the music, except the ... first lyrics, the ones the sings? i dont know that one, but the rest i do and love _ love the story too. :)
charmedblush chapter 19 . 4/12/2010
That was amazing, you are fabulous.
charmedblush chapter 3 . 4/11/2010
I love the POV's just keep doing what you are doing! It's great...her prince charming was marvellous. I reviewed that a lot, but I just changed my username.
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
This was really good but I thought you could have explained what "the game" was since you never really did. Still, this first chapter was very interesting :)
TheMoltenWindow chapter 5 . 2/14/2010
Your atention to detail is brillient, I love the fact that we get both of their POV's XD
TheMoltenWindow chapter 3 . 2/12/2010
Brill! Really enjoying :)
TheMoltenWindow chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
A good build up, leaves you wanting more :) will keep reading
sizzymustard12 chapter 3 . 11/29/2009
Do you like The Fray? I noticed that you had two of their songs in this chapter and just decided to let you know that I LOVE THEM!

Sorry got a bit excited then

iam )
sizzymustard12 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Great story, I just have one tiny little thing that I want to tell you about:

"Ladies and gentleman, please settle down," Principal Webster demanded and suddenly, I could hear the crickets(metaphorically speaking, of course). Principal Webster just has that affect on people, in fact, he always has had that affect on people.

The 'affect' should be 'effect' because its talking about the effect it has not how it affects it.

Sorry, im anal about grammar.

Iam )
Sapphyre Nymph chapter 19 . 11/26/2009
this is wonderful...

i loved it..
HelgaBertoni chapter 19 . 11/25/2009
Loved it!
Bluebaybiie chapter 19 . 11/25/2009
Beautiful chapter!

And you wrote a story with a plot I ne ver would have imagined.

You are a very talented writer, and don't ever doubt your chapters xD

Present them with confidence.

Until next time!~~
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