You did an amazing job of portraying a guys point of view. It must have been fun trying to get in his head.

right now Adelaide is being really, really horrible. i wish she would just forgive him.

so much love for this story...i lub it i lub it i lub it.. I love andrew and ade...i love all your characters...'cept the dad - he's a jerk...but anyway I LOVE THIS STORY! U R AWESOME

Love the music, except the ... first lyrics, the ones the sings? i dont know that one, but the rest i do and love _ love the story too. :)

That was amazing, you are fabulous.

I love the POV's just keep doing what you are doing! It's great...her prince charming was marvellous. I reviewed that a lot, but I just changed my username.

This was really good but I thought you could have explained what "the game" was since you never really did. Still, this first chapter was very interesting :)

Your atention to detail is brillient, I love the fact that we get both of their POV's XD

Brill! Really enjoying :)

A good build up, leaves you wanting more :) will keep reading

Do you like The Fray? I noticed that you had two of their songs in this chapter and just decided to let you know that I LOVE THEM!

Sorry got a bit excited then

iam )

Great story, I just have one tiny little thing that I want to tell you about:

"Ladies and gentleman, please settle down," Principal Webster demanded and suddenly, I could hear the crickets(metaphorically speaking, of course). Principal Webster just has that affect on people, in fact, he always has had that affect on people.

The 'affect' should be 'effect' because its talking about the effect it has not how it affects it.

Sorry, im anal about grammar.

Iam )

this is wonderful...

i loved it..

Loved it!

Beautiful chapter!

And you wrote a story with a plot I ne ver would have imagined.

You are a very talented writer, and don't ever doubt your chapters xD

Present them with confidence.

Until next time!~~