|Reviews for Raw|
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Wow, scary, just before I read this I went out in the pitch black, moonless night, and walked across the grass until my feet were numb, then walked down the road, jst to feel the pain of it. But the cold numbed my feet, and it didnt work. Very very scary. Its like youve taken my emotion fro me and funeled it into words
| DELETED20 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
cool, little repitive though but good otherwise.