the hells wrong with brecken? i think hes losing it. ALL of it.

~Black VP~

Brecken's being a priiiiiiiiiiiiiick. Sorry, up past curfew so these might be really short so i dont have to make to much clicking noises.

~Black VP~

oooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh boy

~Black VP~

This is the climax? Maybe? 'Cause during the climax, usually, everything just goes

BOOM

and I'm thinking this kinda went

BOOM

so yeah. Wonder what's gonna happen next!

~Black VP~

Man, I really love Gavin. Is there not a moment where he sucker-punches Brecken in the face? 'Cause I definitely don't love Brecken.

~Black VP~

yup, I'm probably going to go into a rant of 'oh boy' because I really want to see where this is going to go. I'm staying up all night for this story/ Nights. I don't care! I want to read it all! thank you author-san for making this~~~~~

~Black VP~

Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy. That's all I could think of saying since all I want to do is read the rest of this. X)

~Black VP~

Dang, that ending though:

"Then Gavin opened his mouth and ruined everything."

Brecken is just wonderful. He's such a happy, good person.

I wish he would eventually get hit in the head with a soccer ball. X)

~Black VP~

Wow, Brecken's a f*cking prick. Sorry for the language. But stil, dude, you brought this upon yourself, Brecken! xp lol

~Black VP~

Man, this guy has SERIOUS problems. Like, dude. YOU fucked up. Deal with it, man.

But, serious, this just got fun. I can't wait to find out what happens.

~Black VP~

yo~ interesting. Can't help but wish things had blown up a little more in Brecken's face, but I might like this better.

~Black VP~

Is he seriously going to make that offer? Oh gods, he is. This is spiraling down, down, down. Oh boy. I can just imagine what will happen. Nothing good. Nothing good.

Buuuuuut, I do understand this guy, Gavin's, thought process about adrenaline. What the heck, of course I do. Adrenaline makes people do the most f*cked up sh*t. But it's also like drugs. I think some call it high on life. Sometimes, under some situations, It's called high off life.

I wonder where things will do from here. Up or down?

~Black VP~

Well, this Collin is gonna f*ck up in life, if nothing else. xp. lol, pardon my language. Sorry, sorry. But I like to express feelings through carefully, or not so carefully chosen words. You know, well pieced together lines of perfection can really sway a person. But hasty, direct, tactless words get the words across. That's how I think. And I think this Collin has problems and this Brecken is GOING to have problems very soon.

~Black VP~

Ah~ I already love the character and personality of Gavin. I'm going to enjoy this a lot. I can't wait.

Well, the here comes the next chapter.

~Black VP~

Whoa, okay, I know I fall in love with stories way too easily. I've ready crappy stories before and still got into them because that's just who I am, you know? And I'm sure I have a problem with saying this every time. But this is freaking awesome. I'm already in love with it. And I can't, can't, can't, Can Not, wait to find out what happens. I'll try my very best to review for every one of your chapters. I usually do that because it gives people boots to write more but doesn't look like you need that. Since you have over 600 reviews and already finished the story.

Still! I am letting you know what I think on every chapter.

~Black VP~