Reviews for Power Trip
Rubedo Jr chapter 30 . 7/10/2011
How can I put this...ah.

That was damn intense.

The way you carried the energy through, that pure, primal lust, it was an excellent use of prose, and let no one tell you differently. Now, on to the mysteries of those other characters...something about how, I suppose possessive Madden seems about Gavin, it's just got me really curious about more if Gavin's family life. I'm glad you'll be brining Macken and Madden around more often; I hate not having answers.

Let's keep up the good work!

Rubedo Jr.
Jodiexxx chapter 30 . 7/10/2011
Not pretty hot.

It IS hot. :D

YAY. Another update!

I wonder how it'd be like now that they've already done it. :D

I am so looking forward to more.

I really, REALLY love Gavin. I WANT HIM. :(


Hahaha, anyway. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update. :D

janjisty chapter 30 . 7/10/2011
O.O That was hot.
no-ones-puppet chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
Ahh! Holy shit! Okay so that was super descriptive... And I loved it. Lol. Brecken still being the narcist he is in the middle of having sex is just so easy to imagine... Although the proclamation of love on Gavin's part was a little unexpected. I mean, I know he has deep feelings for Brecken but I didn't think they were that deep. I just hope that he doesn't get too upset when Brecken doesn't respond right away... If he ever does say it back that is.
Yereanth16 chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
That chapter was...HOT I wonder how hes going to act around Gavin now that they finally crossed the line.
Poptart Guava King chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
What do I think? I think that there is a tingle in my loins and this chapter put it there. could be the remnants of the stomach virus I've had...oh well. GREAT CHAPTER. AGH. THEY DID IT. *dies*
kissedbymidnight chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
Yay! Super hot:)Though I didn't know if you'd have Brecken do it or not. I thought you may tease us:) And Gavin admitted he loved Brecken and it didn't even make him mad! In fact, he even admits Gavin was his best lay. Haha, Brecken has been making some great progress_ And he was his usually rough and alpha male self. He bit Gavin's shoulder, which wouldn't be to big a deal, but he did it hard. Oww!:) Also, love how crazy Brecken is about Gavin's voice and expressions. They are such a great pair though if I saw them in real life like that I would probably think their relationship was completely fucked up. But this is a story and I completely love it! Go great author, queen Calico Trayce!lol._ Oh and me, complain about shorter chapters?Never!:)
MeowGoesTheCow chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
God damn...that was sooo fucking hot... my god so amazing please keep writing
Jaden and Adderly chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
I'm pretty sure that I've waited my whole, entire life for THIS MOMENT, THIS MOMENT RIGHT HERE. And it was the hottest thing ever! God, I just love Gavin. Gavin's such a slut, and Brecken loves it. And it was the best lay of his life. THE BEST LAY OF HIS LIFE. * gushes *
2cute4ya14 chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
Oh my that was hot! And it's something Gavin has been wanting for awhile now! The only problem now is for Brecken to actually date Gavin now.
restinbeatz chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
Nice very nice. I think someone's falling in love.
Drowning Ninja chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
You have a dirty dirty little mind there...


Write more! I will be waiting xD
deshaunwalker chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
Yeah... that was pretty hot. I half expected Brecken to be all "fuck, Gavin, I love you too" but he didn't. Oh well. Can't wait for the next chapter!
ThE wRiTeR mY wOrDs My SoUl chapter 30 . 7/9/2011
I don't even have words, Gavin was ridiculously hot, finally getting to be with the boy he loves and Brecken felt it... he felt love. It was breath-taking and amazing.

Seriously, incredible job!

: )
no-ones-puppet chapter 29 . 7/7/2011
Ahh. I got behind in the story... Now I'm caught up. You're awesome, the story is awesome, despite the fact that Brecken's hotcoldhotcold personality is starting to piss me off. I gues I've just never meet someone that could frustrate me as much as Gavin does to him. It's still highly entertaining though and you now have me desperately waiting for the deal behind his brothers, or at least more of them! :)
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