yay more more more

OMG I can't believe you left us hanging there...ugh!

I could feel Brecken's frustration, he's wound tighter than a top. I actually felt somewhat sorry for him in this chap. But, it works well for Gavin...lol!

Hm and I think Colin is being a sneaky little conniver!

Awesome update, but please don't make us wait too long for the next one! Although I apologize for my delay in reading and reviewing this chap! :)

!xD kick ass chapter. This is veryy intense. Will he kiss Gavin? I must knoww

*fan girl squeal*

Gavin is a bit weird in this chapter...but Brecken is a total jerk haha

Wow wow. Wow. Amazing chap :) Brecken's frustration really came out here. He's BOUND to kiss Gavin, because he's obviously desperate. Exciting :D :D :D

But yeah, why DOES Gavin like him so much? He's really not a nice guy. But then, in a way, neither is Gavin, so perhaps they are made for eachother!

Update son please!

Gavin!

OK Gavin is not blowing guys left and right! Is he?

I can not wait til Brecken realizes all the passion and amotions Gavin's keeping from him.

And I can not wait until their next encounter! You're torturing me! :)

Oh man this was short, but it was still good!

Oh poor Brecken...not! I'm actually enjoying his agonizing over Gavin, as it's the result from a situation he created.

I'd like to believe Gavin knew (or at the very least hoped) how Brecken would react and he's now waiting in the wings, biding his time. :)

Omg yay you wrote moree! Loved it

Top Five things he HATES or LOVES? :D :D :D :D :D

Lol these last two were great!

Both chaps were great, obviously wished they were longer, but can see your reasons for keeping them they way they were.

So Gavin either knows he was so good and has effectively laid the bait and is waiting on Brecken. Or he's now given up, feeling Brecken doesn't like him enough and he'll never be able to persuade him any better than he did with the blow job... OR something else has actually happened to Gavin and Brecken hasn't seen him and doesn't know what's going on...

Either way, two well written chaps :)

This is awesome! Poor Gavin, Breacken treats him so badly! I think, considering how Collin is acting, he totally got a bj from guy before probably Gavin! Which is where Gavin got his experience from! Idk those are totally just my theory about whats going.

I also would love if you maybe did a chapter from Gavin's POV to get more of a feeling on how hes actually handling all of this.

Can't wait for the next update!

Methinks Brecken is in over his head! Way to go Gavin!

I get so irritated with Collin...ugh. But you've peaked my interest about his past now...lol!

I can't wait to find out what happens next.