Reviews for Badminton Bets |
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![]() ![]() That was spectacular! Prob my favorite fanfiction on the entire website! Keep writing :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say Susanne is really talent haha she learn playing just by watching him everyday. .Good one. .but I have doubt with Carlos. did he actually let her to win? |
![]() ![]() Is it a normal thing for a boy to offer his future girlfriend in her underwears to the friends? I dont want to sound to prim but that's quite assholey for the boy & idioty for the girl. To accept such absurd condition for such an asshole. But who am i to judge whatever floats your boat i suppose. |
![]() ![]() Aww great story, but what is a OneShot? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a cute story :) Though the part of an athletic person beating an extremely athletic person isn't quite doing it for me (but of course that's the majority of the story), haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story just as much as the other one I just read (Don't text and drive). You really are a great writer! Cheers, TQL |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hoho~ the fact that this was (somewhat) about badminton caught my attention. (bcos imma badminton player~) :) the story sounded really quite realistic to me when they were playing the game - like how you observe someone's moves to know their strengths & weaknesses, etc. although i was kinda disappointed that Carlos wasn't that good of a player. (or maybe Susanne had some hidden talent for it afterall.) i really liked Susanne - she has character! :) in short, great story! hahas. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I really enjoyed that she wasn't weak and nervous like most of the lead females in these type of stories. It was a refreshing change. I liked this oneshot a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this piece because of the way it directs my thoughts, all the way from intrigue to dread to indignation. I appreciate her determination and how she pulls through even though she stacks the odds against herself. I would have written in later that she was a pro player acting the rookie to have a good time, but I don’t think that would have gone neatly into your ending. Very nice work. |
![]() ![]() it was alright story.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love how your characters from different one shots are related D and i love reading all of them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, this was so cute! I loved it, especially since Badminton is the only sport I -kinda- excell at. XD |