i like it

Kristina:

yeah, Smallbrook twins? I would NEVER guess who they're supposed to be! ;) I like the story though. why can't I write like you do?

Wow, something realistic and believable for a change :) Thank you so much for writing this, I was getting sick of overdramaticised-bordering-on-TV-soapie-nobody-would-ever-be-like-that-in-real-life type stuff. Very well written, great description, great characters. Nothing bad to say, it's all good :)