|Reviews for Heart of Pure Sugar|
| Imena Tanaka chapter 9 . 4/26/2010
OOMGG I LOVED IT :D EXPLODING CATS ALERT XD lol..please please write more :D
| SanjiandSerea chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Hmm strange but awfully cute, your heroine has a slightly masculine name but so does Akira-chan... anyway awesome, could I get this to Goubou Doujou Otome.
| FaytSeeker chapter 9 . 1/6/2010
I just love how Daisuke had so much trouble with instant mix. It was beyond sad lol. Kudos to Miki for being observant of their upcoming relationship. Also, school has been annoying lately and so is Christmas vacation. This chapter is really a nice break from the hectic mess that my school put me in. Also, it made me realize I haven't get a chance to update my story too. Hope you update soon!
| xEutopiax chapter 9 . 12/20/2009
Haha, I love Miki. She's so quick to catch on to things ;). Dai-chan and Tachi really do make a really cute couple though-mostly cause they're so oblivious to it, themselves-I can't wait to see when Daisuke's gonna realize :) I actually like Tachi's personality because he's so um...I guess blunt would be the best word. But I also like how he sort of does whatever Daisuke wants (with a certain amount of begging). :b
- as he tried to walk [straight]
- He pulled out his wallet then handed her a handful of yen. [awk sentence]
Okay wow. Nanami is kind of annoying for me now. Ugh.
- The parents didn’t act [too] mature
Haha, thanks for that chapter. It was fun, and a refreshing break from studying :S I know-school's been really annoying for me too lately. :S
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
- Kaiyako :)
| FaytSeeker chapter 8 . 10/15/2009
Lol, talk about the huge age differences. Poor Tachi, brimmed with jealously to make himself a pathetic drunk. I like this chapter more than your other chapters. I hope you update soon.
| FaytSeeker chapter 7 . 10/15/2009
Wow, this chapter is shorter than the other ones. Take a few minutes to read this one and all the sudden, poor Daisuke was kidnapped as someone's wife? Lol, your imagination is crazy.
| FaytSeeker chapter 6 . 10/15/2009
Wow, that's fast-paced alright. Cheating, bunnies, evil brother, romantic looks over dinner flying everywhere! At least the comedy and chaos are still there. It's a good chapter. Onward to the next one.
| FaytSeeker chapter 5 . 10/15/2009
Sorry for the late review. That was funny chapter especially when Ishi bursted through the door. I laugh at how their first meeting goes when Ishi choked on Tachi's cooking. Sorry, Daisuke, yelling at them won't work at all lol.
| Makia-chan chapter 8 . 10/5/2009
thnk for the chappy.
keep writting my friend keep writting ;3
| xEutopiax chapter 8 . 9/21/2009
AHAHAHA. OMG, Tachi just got PNWED. Nanami is hilarious, I can't wait to read more about him. *Le gasp* He's-he's *points finger* A PEDO! *Faints*
*After recovery* Lol, sorry bout that :D
Haha, Tachi has the weirdest quirks in the world, "have a happy period" I nearly choked on my coke right then : :P But seriously though, DAISUKE needs to realize that they're meant to be together forever and ever.
Wait, quixotic? How do you let someone down quixotically? *is confused* :S
:D I love Miki and Marion, they're so cool! *swirly eyed* Way to tell that Nanami idiot who's boss! Yah! :D Haha, "He's more pathetic than I thought" :D ZOMG, I totally agree, I can't BELIEVE he wants Ichi BACK.
GR. YOU IDIOT. *Hits Tachi repeatedly* I thought you'd finally realized your feelings!
YAYDaiTa shipping :P
| xEutopiax chapter 7 . 9/21/2009
I'll just write this down as I go along, that way it'll be easier for me to remember :D
-"And you call me baka."
- - - I'm confused :S
Ahaha, "You should have tried harder. Now we're going to have to take PUBLIC transportation." :D I don't know why but that made me laugh :P
AHAHA. I can't wait to see Taichi be all like "ZOMG. BACK OFF SHE'S MINE." I LOVED it when he bought her the necklace, the romance is FORMING. *Peace sign* YAH!
Great chapter I enjoyed reading it :D Ha-ha, I swear Daisuke and Tachi's interactions are becoming more and more funny by the day THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE DEDICATION *goes to Tamaki's emo-corner* I can't believe I didn't see that.
I'M SORRY! *snff sniff*
GOOD JOB I loved this chapter, and all your other chapters :D Haha, I'm off to the next one!
| xEutopiax chapter 6 . 8/25/2009
Oh my god, awesome chapter!
This story, once again, had me laughing out loud! I love Daisuke, she's so preppy in everything she does. And comical but without trying :P She kind of reminds me of Mikan Sakura from Alice Academy :D
-“Yes…can I have some now?”
You should hit return after this, so that the two of their speaking is on different lines.
“Now when I open her front door, your going to hop in and say-”
Same thing here
-“That would sure [when] me over right now. I am starving.”
Do you mean win me over or...?
-Your still [mines]…right?”
Well, that's all I can see :] Good job with this chapter. I liked the amount of drama in this one; like the moment that the two of them had. :]
Good luck with school!
| xEutopiax chapter 5 . 8/14/2009
Great chapter! It was really funny :P Ishi's a pretty cool character, I think I'm going to enjoy reading about her :D Ha-ha, I love how Daisuke takes everything: like when there was tension she wanted to laugh. That's kind of like me! I laugh in the weirdest situations and everyone gets mad at me :[
-“ I was a free spirit before I met him! I don’t know what happened…or how I could accept an ring from such cold hearted shrew!”
“I was a free spirit before I met him! I don’t know what happened…or how I could accept a ring from such cold hearted shrew!”
Also, I'm a little confused about something. Is Ishi/was Ishi in love with Tachi or her older brother? -.-" sorry I'm so slow :]
| dennes the eggplant chapter 5 . 8/13/2009
I liked your new chapter. Ishi is delightfully crazy. I still can't get the image of her driving a bubblegum pink moped through an apartment complex, up a flight of stairs, and through somebody's front door, out of my head LOL. I wish the chapter was a bit longer, because I wanted to see more interaction between the couple, but I still had fun reading this chapter.
| Aria Orchid chapter 4 . 8/6/2009
Ha ha, I cracked up at Tachi's "options". It seems that he likes Daisuke, but then again, he really doesn't. I'm not sure.
I can't wait to get to the part with the lessons. I don't think it's going to go very well with Daisuke's lack of abilities, and that will be hilarious within itself.
Hope chapter 5 comes soon!