Reviews for Ravenspire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() love the story. p.s especially aly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite a story you've got here! Me likey! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is my faverite chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() poison again I ) D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() well good bye Brandon :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I'm glad Edmund stayed. I applaud you. Not just this chapter, but for every chapter I read I feel like I really know the character that the point of view's in. Excellent work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always like the dear diary chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! Excellent chapters! :) sorry its taken me awhile to read them! Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ah ha trying to harnes the energy of the world that was what the old creepy guy was talking about... she should know better : |
![]() ![]() I always like the dear diary chapters |
![]() ![]() poor Aiden, Aly thinks he's a mass murderer or somthing |
![]() ![]() Bran falls and Darth Brandon rises muhahahahahahahaha D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story a lot so far, but I did have a few questions. At the beginning of the story it seemed as though Jo was more of a mother figure to them than their own mother, but in later chapters that doesn't seem to be the case. Is it just that their mother (or Aly and Brandon's mother) is just not good with children? Or is Jo just worse when she's at the school? Also, How old is Aiden? And why has Aly never considered the possibility of someone else poisoning her? Jo says that she's good at reading people, or at least better for her time at the school, how could she not even investigate other people being the source of poisoning Aly? Personally I'm going with her new best friend, but I'm open to suggestions. I hope you update soon. ~jlr |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your several day intervuls and how you switch characters after every chapter... nice book:D |