Reviews for Ravenspire
fatimah chapter 53 . 11/20/2011
love the story.

p.s especially aly.
Nintendo Fan 101 chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Quite a story you've got here! Me likey!
Cory Sparks chapter 45 . 4/11/2010
this is my faverite chapter :D
Cory Sparks chapter 41 . 2/14/2010
poison again I ) D :D
Cory Sparks chapter 40 . 2/14/2010
well good bye Brandon :(
Karyn13 chapter 38 . 1/22/2010
Yay! I'm glad Edmund stayed. I applaud you. Not just this chapter, but for every chapter I read I feel like I really know the character that the point of view's in. Excellent work
Cory Sparks chapter 34 . 1/21/2010
I always like the dear diary chapters
Karyn13 chapter 37 . 1/20/2010
WOW! Excellent chapters! :) sorry its taken me awhile to read them! Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more!
Cory chapter 30 . 1/12/2010
ah ha trying to harnes the energy of the world that was what the old creepy guy was talking about... she should know better :
Cory chapter 29 . 1/12/2010
I always like the dear diary chapters
Cory chapter 28 . 1/12/2010
poor Aiden, Aly thinks he's a mass murderer or somthing
Cory Sparks chapter 15 . 1/11/2010
Bran falls and Darth Brandon rises muhahahahahahahaha D
jlr chapter 32 . 1/10/2010
I like this story a lot so far, but I did have a few questions. At the beginning of the story it seemed as though Jo was more of a mother figure to them than their own mother, but in later chapters that doesn't seem to be the case. Is it just that their mother (or Aly and Brandon's mother) is just not good with children? Or is Jo just worse when she's at the school?

Also, How old is Aiden? And why has Aly never considered the possibility of someone else poisoning her? Jo says that she's good at reading people, or at least better for her time at the school, how could she not even investigate other people being the source of poisoning Aly? Personally I'm going with her new best friend, but I'm open to suggestions.

I hope you update soon. jlr
Cory Sparks chapter 12 . 1/10/2010
I like your several day intervuls and how you switch characters after every chapter... nice book:D
Cory Sparks chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
wow you have an amazing writing style :D... nice book :I
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