|Reviews for reckless|
| young and the reckless chapter 18 . 10/22/2010
hah, that is absolutely awesome.
what a quirky little tale..
i do hope you continue it at some point.
but, well done :)
| young and the reckless chapter 16 . 9/26/2010
glad you're back
| Creeping Collarbones chapter 14 . 5/6/2010
I love this. Poetry with a plot is awesome. Job well done!
And I loved the half of the heart. Amazing.
| young and the reckless chapter 8 . 10/30/2009
ah. this is freaking GENIUS.
clever. witty. quirky, in way. yet saddening.
i'm favoriting now, in honor of this chapter.
| young and the reckless chapter 7 . 10/30/2009
for some reason, i was subtly reminded of snow white while reading this.
i really do like the comparison, though i almost wish the couplets would have rhymed,
seeing as the other stanzas did.
however, i cannot rhyme myself, so i understand completely :)
| young and the reckless chapter 6 . 10/30/2009
great last line that has me itching to click to the next chapter.
and i'm loving how even though your chapter titles are just
the first words of the piece, they fit wonderfully.
| young and the reckless chapter 5 . 10/30/2009
i love that all the brackets give a completely
different meaning to her situation.
| young and the reckless chapter 4 . 10/30/2009
ah, this is has a ravaging alure about it.
i love it.
| young and the reckless chapter 3 . 10/30/2009
i love the descriptions of time and death in this chapter.
very blunt and condemning.
| young and the reckless chapter 2 . 10/30/2009
"cut-outs of separate photographs/crazy-glued together in hopes that they'll never come apart"
oh how i know this too well. it hurts, but it's beautiful.
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
my god, am i hooked.
things really picked up for me at the
"so much for being peter pan" line.
that whole stanza just made me...grin and ache.
oh yay :)
| Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 15 . 9/14/2009
Yay, you finally updated! :)
As always, I love everything about your poetry, and it is so evident that you put so much thought into your writing from choosing the words to the formatting. Update!
~ Sakina x
| Isca chapter 15 . 9/9/2009
"Her only soulmate." I find the use of the word 'only' here very intriguing-clearly, the speaker isn't sure whether she believes in the existence of one or multiple soulmates. To me, 'soul mate' refers to only one other soul, so I like that you twisted this concept on its head, and suggests that we may very well have multiple soulmates, like a 'romantic soulmate' and a 'friend soulmate,' etc. Oh, as an aside, I love the form of this poem-it's so perfectly rectangular. ;)
| anika k chapter 15 . 9/6/2009
Aww, I'm glad that Kim has Dave. She needs someone like him in her life. I'm kind of hoping that their relationship will become something more, though the end of this suggests that they're happy simply being friends. Again, really awesome chapter. I'll be watching for updates!
| anika k chapter 14 . 9/6/2009
...and the greatness continues. The metaphor of the Converse and Jackie and Kim's friendship was amazing, as it the shape of the half heart. There are so many lines in this chapter that I love that it would take up too much space to list them all. So I'll just tell you that this was probably my favorite chapter yet. [: