Reviews for Betrayed
ayebuzz chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
this one is my favorite.

I had a friend, just like that.

ever read my song, obviously dangerous?

it sort of explains it.

I would love to hear more :D
give me november chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Great poem. I'm sorry it's about me...
jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
If i could, I'd hug you right now and kill him with a bat,tongs, and dry ice. I love you, twin. That's one of your best works.
Said Author chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Wow, really good! You took the emotions and twisted them to the very end. Loved the part with the sharpie!