Reviews for Voices of Monsters |
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Uncertain chapter 1 . 6/14/2009 Nice. Sounds a little like my AIWS story towards the end... Cool beans. |
Julia chapter 1 . 6/13/2009 i like it kaitlin! its cool... and kinda creepy ) but its really good! |
Livi chapter 1 . 6/12/2009 Love it! especially the last line. as always, ur writing is brilliant :) creepy _ reminds me kinda of Lauren's thing remember? |
SayaMtisuki chapter 1 . 6/12/2009 This is interesting. [In a good way: that you put in a lot of time and effort.] I expressly like the examples you had like for the third paragraph: "Isn’t that what we are all supposed to do? Become slaves to the voices? The voices of elders, of teachers, of parents? That was what I was taught, to listen and obey. I know I was taught to obey. Since I can remember, it was “eat your vegetables”, and “learn your lessons”. If I obeyed, life went on as normal. If I didn’t I was punished. Why then, should we not listen to those of our own minds?" Also, it sounds like you want people to think that the voices in our heads are "evil" not quite sure if you want that kind of mood. I really like the ending. That's my favorite part; although, it is kinda sad. |