|Reviews for Sorry I trusted you|
| Pegasus Rider chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
The grammar needs...work. I think that it is too short other than that, and you keep repeating what you have already said. I know that is a style, but not in this case.
| Said Author chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Loved the rhyme and the way you capitalized some words for emphasis. Nice work! :}
| lilcarts21 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!
| SeriesMakers'2 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
wow...that was deep...
good rhyming...(i don't know if I spelled that right.)
that was a really nice poem