Reviews for Wants
Isca chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
"I cry an awful lot." Hmm, perhaps the speaker is subconsciously worried and fretful.

"What about in five years though?" This line reminded me of the song 'Five Years' by David Bowie ;).

"All I really want is you." How sweet. :)
katt chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
I really like the way you've written this Jaz; it's awesome. The way that you're so honest throughout the piece, "And I’m not the type to fret all that much/Though I admit I cry an awful lot", makes it so much more real when you end it.


the.5.elements chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
This was amazing! It so relatable and it was very well written. Great Job!