Reviews for your heart comes in my size
Glyph Shane chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
i found the perfect heart to pin to my sleeve

and it was just in my size

they failed to mention it was yours though

this made me chuckle all happy-indie-like because the set up is perfect. all love song like and then 'they failed to mention it was yours though'. only thing is i keep feeling there should be a comma after the word 'yours', but that just might be me :)

overall this is wonderfully executed
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
this is really interesting. you gave it a nice spin, and it surely made for a brilliant poem.
Isca chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Hah. The speaker found the boy's heart at a used store. How priceless is that. That's definitely one way to say that someone has is romantically experienced.
Dr. Sweet chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
A new favorite i must say. I think of going thrifting with someone whenever i read this :)

Very indie rock n' roll
tangerine dreamer chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
this is an interesting read. i like the idea of hearts being too big or small for someone, meaning the perfect size is of the person you're meant to be with. nice work! ]
the.5.elements chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
This was so good, and i love how i can relate to it. Great job )