One of the best stories I have ever read on here. I truly hope you update one day.

PLEASE PLEAS PLEASE Update soon! I love this story SO MUCH! DEFINITELY One of the BEST stories i have ever read on this website! Instead of a cliche weak girl that always needs to be saved and can't do anything or even think by herself, you have created a strong independent, intelligent girl who i am rooting for all the way! You have created a whole new world and i love it so much and i wish you would continue! I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope everything is going well in life and you get the inspiration to continue this story! Your words are so beautiful, keep up the amazing work! 3

I really like thos story. Its a unique horror/maybe romance and Id really love to read what happens next! Please update again soon. :)

A unique and really interesting vampire story.
I will be interested in the finished story.

I was so glad you updated the story.

While the last chapter didn't reveal that much about M's "family", this one proved to be quite an interesting one: Eliza showing her vampire side and Blake being sneakier than I'd thought he'd be. Also, I like the arrival of a new character, Leland. He seems odd, but I'm curious to see what he knows about Amelia and how he knows about her... I was beginning to like him until he participated in the feast downstairs... still, I reminded myself that he's a vampire.

What I like most about Amelia is her skepticism and that she's very fierce. She's tough - and that makes her in my opinion, a very strong female character (you rarely see those in fantasy/horror fiction). Also, not making her so submissive makes her much more interesting and brings more dimension to the character - and also, it makes the relationship between her and M more dynamic.

I will gladly wait for the update. I also wish you the best with publishing this story, and don't forget to post a link to buy it when it's done. :)

Your story is amazing and you're a great writer!

When you have it published let me know please how I can get the book

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What a chapter!

Amazing work :)

What a monster! I adore your story! It's one of the best horror stories on this site.

Wow! I'm still on the 1st chapter but this story got me hooked!

Wonderful story thus far! So much intrigue and all the other elements of a fine horror story.

Please continue soon!

You don't know how glad I am you decided to post this chapter and to continue. Had me on the edge of my seat.

I won't repeat what I said the last time about this chapter, only some bits that I've overlooked - I really liked the imagery of her dream, with her in the boat and the water, it was almost like a movie scene playing inside my mind as I read it.

I suspected some bits of M & her mother's relationship, but I'm still curious.

Hope you update as soon as possible! :)

Read the update, chapter 5, a few days ago, but I now I see it's not here anymore, so I'll just write anyway.

For starters, presenting his family (sister and brother) seems an unusual choice, because this way his whole "aura" of mystery disappears a bit, but I like the new direction of this story. It makes me even more curious and I wonder what Amelia will do next.

Hope you will update soon, and if you plan on publishing it, do mention a website or something like that where I could buy it. :)

I am loving the story, your plot is excellent and I can't wait to see where you go with it.

Wow. I couldn't stop reading this. Simply amazing.

One thing that bothers me, and perhaps it's because I"m from this modern world where violence and brutality is on full display: Our victim/heroin is complaining about how horribly she is treated, but in my opinion, she has suffered very little in comparison to how she could be treated. She was given a comfortable bed, hot bath, food. She wasn't physically tortured.

Now as time goes on, some of these things are less true, but I still think she should look at her predictiment with a dose of reality and look at her captor as someone that could inflict real damage, and not the mere mind games she's been exposed to.

(of course that is easy for me to say, tucked away safely behind my computer screen :) )

Thanks for the great story. I hope you write more!

I had a pleasant surprise when I saw you've finally updated.

I certainly did not expect that! Him saving her by giving his blood to her. That was something unexpected. We learn something about him in every chapter - but the question which has no answer yet asked by Amelia and by the readers of this story ,I suppose, is "Why?" "why her?" - the suspense is thrilling. I also wonder what connection does he have to her mother.

I also loved how Amelia continues to resist him. She's such a strong character. About M, he's mysterious, a bit brooding and weird. I say weird because I can't figure him out - he's a deadly vampire and yet he shows signs of affection for Amelia by saving her. Yet he's abusing too, let's not forget that. On a parenthesis, Amelia reminds me a little bit of Gwen in The Wolfman, played by Emily Blunt and I imagine Amelia's appearance a little bit like Emily's - the Victorian costumes help as well.

All in all, I will be waiting for an update. Hope you'll update soon, because this is a very thrilling story!