Reviews for Jailbait |
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![]() ![]() ![]() cute. I liked it a lot. I love how well you tied up the loose ends. I don't feel like begging for a sequel at all for these two. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this story. I sent you an email to beg for access to the uncensored version. I loved how even the side characters had such in-depth personalities. It felt like any of the staff at the school would have really interesting stories and could stand as main characters on their own. Very nice job on this. It's going on my fav list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! You did a really great job; keep up the good work:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cries* aww, we don't get the rest of the scene? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only phrase he said that I've heard of was polishing the family jewels, lol:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha, little Mexican apple thief... |
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![]() ![]() That was one of the cutest stories I have ever read! Thank you for posting it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it...I admit at first I was convinced their relationship might not work but by the end of it I don't think they could have found anyone better...loved it...:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Although this is the first story I read by you, as I mentioned in a PM message I loved it. The relationship between Simon and Damian felt real. Relationships don't start out of the blue and usually we don't fall in love within hours of knowing someone so I was happy that it took these two characters time to admit their feelings. Also the fact that you allowed Simon to respect Damian, even if in fact he wanted him bad, made me feel like he truly loved him. The fact that he waited for Damian to mature and to truly heal was really beautiful. Anyways thank you for sharing your story with us. Best wishes sweetie... Lizray |
![]() ![]() It really pisses me off how you keep mentioning the "explicit scenes of explicit sex" that you took out because not all of us are 18. You even said on your site how you read smutty things when you were under 18. And I guarantee a good percentage of the people who emailed you for the password protected chapters are under 18. You should either re-edit this to not mention the sex scenes at all, put in the sex parts, and or say in the first chapter that this story will not contain any sex, but is rated 'm' for the situations. The reason I say this, is because with the way you have it now, it just makes you seem like a pretentious twelve year old pretending to be an adult. And if you are SO worried about the legal technicalities that come with posting smut on the internet, then you should stop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They're so adorable, I love them so much :D This was a great story, thanks for posting it. ] |
![]() ![]() Please don't laugh but what does Jailbait mean?Please can I get lock in info for your site? I am 21 years old. That is 3 years older than your required age. So pretty please with a cherry on top? |
![]() ![]() ![]() -wipes the corner of my eye- Beautiful C: I loved every bit. Great job on this. Truly. PS. I love how the rings matched their eye colors n_n |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOODNESS D; I wanna read. Except~ my phone won't allow me on your site -head hangs- Bummer. BUT! I still love this story all the same c: |