So, I thought It would be significantly easier to review here, plus it would up you review number, which may count for something? I dunno XD Well, I loved the story, wish it was longer and there was more between the ages of 15-18 but I still liked the story a lot! Thanks for the upload (only advice would be to have more of a climax/turning point/ plot twist thingy) Thank you so much for the upload (goes off to your website to read some more)D

I loved this story so much! And I was wondering if I could perhaps get that password thing to read the smut scenes? lol

Please?

Awesome story! :D One of the best I've read in a while :)

Finally, a love story :)

I thoroghly enjoyed reading this, it was extremely well written, touching and genuine. Thank you.

I'm not sure if you're aware of this but setting the raing as M for mature already sets readers up for a preliminary waring of upcoming sexual content. You may have been trying to prrotect innocent eye and whatnot, but there is so much pornographic content on this site it's just pointless. This happen's to be the reason why, I myself, absolutely refuse to post my pieces past the first few chapter. Good luck with you ongoing series'.

OMG

I love this!

I love the other story too ( seem to have forgotten the name though... it was about Kat and Sanura! I remember that. Please update that btw.)

Anyway, I wanted to check some stuff out on your site but it's password protected. VVHHYY?

Amazing story btw, if I haven't said so already.

that was cute! i loved it!

Interesting storyline, barely any spelling mistakes, and intruiging characters. Sequel? Don't feel you have to write one; this is good as a stand alone.

Overall, GREAT!

Please allow me to veiw the blocked chapters on your website - I feel I still don't know the full story without them.

I like where this story is heading and the first chapter was good enough for me to want to read on. I just found that the first half of the chapter dragged on a little bit. There seemed to be a lot of telling instead of showing. Besides that it's pretty good and I gonna keep reading.

*laughs* I must say you are quite the talented write. The story is engaging and the characters fascinating. I really like the way that Damien grew throughout the piece, little by little, but surely. I cheered for him the times he decided sex wasn't enough anymore. *smiles* I also cheered for him when he turned down the rather hot head he was getting from Simon. I also really liked that they both held to the 'nothing illegal' bit. It built up so much respect for them as characters. I really, really liked that.

I agree with your statement that the first few chapters are a little... uhm... rough. I even felt like a couple of times the wrong name was used? That might have just been confusion on my part though. Regardless, they do smoothen out nicely, however. You know, I would highly suggest that you fix them instead of saying 'hang with me, it gets better'. You see, most readers aren't as determined as I am about certain things.

*Laughs* From what I can tell about you based on how you choose to post, you remind me of Simon a little. *grins* I cannot tell you how many people don't actually abide by the 'no smut' rules here on FP (I admittedly am one of those). The rule actually surprised me when I joined because of how much I'd read before joining. *grin* Quite honestly, I think FP is just trying to cover its legal a$$es. Oh well. *smiles* While the X-rated stuff would have been exciting based on how well you write, the story is amazing without it. Like I said, their characters are lovely and their relationship dynamics are both hilarious and believable. Well done. _ Cheers!

i loved this story it was really good, funny,sad,cute,just very emotional in everyway. but i tried going on yer web. & it says its pw procted,can i get the past&user. in pm? pls.O-O

seriously i love this story i laughed, i awwed, i got angry. and its awesome when something gets a reaction out of me. thank you so much for sharing this with all of us. i would like to ask how i can get to read the portions on your website that are password protected, i really wanna read it all but when i tried to read it, it wouldn't let me. would you please let me know in a private mesage.

this is very confusing, and so are the names. i don't even know, nor understand, what is going on.

A nice story and as usual I'm at a loss when it comes to more comments... oh, well. It was amusing and interesting till the last chapter, which doesn't happen often. I'm looking forward to read more of your stories.

There really aren't any rules on fictionpress. as long as you rate the story accordingly. I've read more explicit encounters (M/F, M/M, F/F) then what you have up here now.