Reviews for Don't Take it to Heart
wayfaringstrangers chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
Ahh, I like the happy ending :)
wayfaringstrangers chapter 5 . 1/17/2010
Whoa, intense.

I so was not expecting that ending.
wayfaringstrangers chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
I feel like it could be a song,

with the way it flows and rhymes

so well.
wayfaringstrangers chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I like this one too :)
your infection their plague chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
Oh no! I was like, "Aww! This is a sweet happy love poem!" Until I came to the last stanza. Then I felt bad.

...Could you do a happy version? Possibly?
your infection their plague chapter 4 . 6/15/2009
I liked it. It's different from the first three chapters, but it fits with them, too. The last two lines being seperate from all the others really make it stand out and let the reader know that what the person in the poem is feeling is...intense.
your infection their plague chapter 3 . 6/15/2009
I'm not going to lie.

This is THE best short-poem-that-is-not-a-haiku I've ever read. And -here's the crazy thing I don't read very often- it's complete. I read it one time and felt what I'm pretty sure you were trying to get across.

(plus yes, I AM going to submit a seperate review for each chapter. To put them all in the same review is, frankly, a little cheap.)
your infection their plague chapter 2 . 6/15/2009
Well, "Let You Go? How Could I?" was pretty good. The only somewhat-negative thing that I have to say about it is that, after I was done reading it, I felt like 1. it was missing something, and/or 2. it wasn't quite finished.
your infection their plague chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I think it's amazing! Great poem to start off with.