|Reviews for Awakening|
| Niki Tori chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Can't believe this is a one shot. This has so much potential to be a full length story. Nevertheless, great job. This story was so cute!
thank you for the review of HoPS!
| Home Made Tiramisu chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Short, short, short! But I loved it. I’m not a huge fan of the vampire genre. However, this story caught my attention. I will add it to my favorites.
The grammars were remarkable, I didn’t find any mistakes, and so were the dialog, very cute. However, for Mika who just woke up from the last century, her dialog is a bit … modern.
Now for the bad, well … not really the bad but I just found Chloe’s reaction kind of strange. Sure you sucked on my blood but chillax! Let’s be friends! Mmkay?
I don’t know, if some creepy girl sucked my blood I would be a little pissed and turned on.
| AdamLambertforever12 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Hey, I really like this story! It is so kawaii!