Reviews for Duties of the Double Dog
Charlotte chapter 13 . 6/17/2015
Man, I wish this was finished! Hope one day you pick back up where you left off, what a unique and funny story!
wayfaringstrangers chapter 13 . 5/7/2012
My first guess Is Jackie was pregnant but got an abortion and that's why she's been acting so odd. As for Tiger, he got shot where? You gotta explain how and who (and why do I get the feeling that Megacock is behind it all?).
Anya Fitzgeraldowski chapter 13 . 2/11/2010
Your story deserves love, love, love, love, love.

There's the annoying song lyric of the day.

Amazing work.

And I agree with the Basement Dweller: I would definitely read a sequel to Dear Imagination.
An unloved wing chapter 13 . 11/23/2009
I'm sort of suffering from withdrawal from this story. Please continue because I don't have a patch for this or like gum or something.
We Used To Wait chapter 3 . 10/4/2009
Ilikethisstory.

It's pleasant to read, hence, my reading it. hehe.

Um, um, there's not much i can say yet. I already reviewed about your goodgood writing before, so. . .

Until next time!
Isforwinners chapter 13 . 9/29/2009
YO'

This is great.

Well done.

Also, Sequel/companion story for 'Dear imagination'?, I'd read it.

- Cheers
Downtown Detours chapter 13 . 9/29/2009
This story is sadistic and idiotic.

I love it.

Your stories always make me laugh, no matter what the situation is.
readaholicxxx chapter 13 . 9/28/2009
haha random
ishta chapter 13 . 9/28/2009
I feel like commenting is often a repetative task, so I tend to not do it as often. Having that said I'm glad your back and continueing with the story.

I tend to favorite almost any story (I secretly believe my comp is having un-protected interactions that will result in some type of virus) but usually most stories suck and bore me so I stop reading after chapter 2.

Not the case with your stories. So congradulations on not sucking! Actually, truth be told your better than a lot of published writters (I' ve read many a book that has made me want to set fire to it's author just for creating it).

Alright, I guess I'll sign off with what a 'wise' food court employee once said to me "Congradulations on your aunt, cousin, and sister."
helzyeah chapter 13 . 9/27/2009
i was thinking bout this story just yesterday and thought, havnt had any updates recently...lo and behold you've updated! i love love love this story!

x
jammi chapter 13 . 9/27/2009
One of these days she's going to try to 'walk it off' and it'll turn out that she's suffering from some massive internal bleeding or something along those lines, lol, I swear.

I understand that she wants to remain under the radar but I think it wouldn't kill her to at least consider getting checked out, lol.

And Megacock is a punk with his cop outs all the time, I mean, it might take her a while to do her bit but she at least takes it at face value [though I have no idea how he'll showcase this dare 'fight off an addiction']. Then again, I feel like if they do know who the other is, the dynamic would change so it's probably for the best that he didn't show up. Or pretended not to show up or whatever, lol.

LOL at her prayer to God before she pretends to hold up the convenience story, hahah.
An unloved wing chapter 12 . 9/26/2009
Please update soon (and with some Alex goodness)! I'll beg if necessary! :D
Jandrocafe chapter 12 . 8/24/2009
I really, really like this story.

Your lead character feels like a real person, your supporting cast seems like they could provide just as good of a story were it written from their perspectives, and their interactions feel like I'm listening in on or sometimes participating in a conversation, instead of just merely reading a back and forth dialogue.

Part of the charm of your main is that, despite how horribly fucked up she and her life may be by anyone's account (especially her own!), she is fleshed to a depth that there is something for anyone reading to identify with something, and in doing so, get inside her head; for me it was the warmth of a sibling regarded as more successful looking up to them with admiration for something they do or a quality they possess.

I like that there are no forced constant plot lines; things happen when they need to happen, and everything else can get pushed aside so deal with it.

I'm looking forward to more and hoping that it doesn't end like "You've Got Mail".

The only thing I don't really get is the title, but w/e. I'm sure either it's just a working title, or working off something further down the line.

Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next installment!
TymCon chapter 12 . 8/14/2009
Hahahahah the bar fight bit was so funny:P Good story so far
The Anarchy Pancake chapter 11 . 8/10/2009
This story is amazing. I love every part of it. Rainie is probably my favorite fictional character out there, please keep up the great work.

-Co
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