Reviews for Fast Cars and Freedom
Guest chapter 3 . 5/2/2015
SERIOUSLY?! So the lucky people who noticed this story before the rest of us get the book for free but the rest of us getting a frigging rip-off! This is really frustrated I LOATHE the people who do this! The first few chapters of this book are awesome and now I feel really let down.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/2/2015
SERIOUSLY?! So the lucky people who noticed this book first get it for free but bye rest of us not-so-lucky ones get a teaser 2 chapters?! I'm really frustrated.
AJ chapter 3 . 5/1/2015
Going to get this book then :)
AJ chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Doing great with the story. Once I'm done with this virtually, I will look try to buy it in the future.
witeaya chapter 19 . 12/4/2012
i feel like her father, phoenix and the other cops were taking the easier way of doing their job by making her involved in this particular stint. especially her dad.
the cops can surely find any oth person but bc she was there so yeah.
The Imagination Addict chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
note: "rhyme and reason for" NOT "rhyme and rhythm to"
Starcrazed chapter 24 . 9/22/2011
Awesome, i loved it.
non.graceful chapter 24 . 8/30/2011
I think the ending - the epilogue- was disappointing. You could have done something with it- maybe showed us that they're actually still together and going strong? Maybe just a short scene with everybody in it...

It was good story overall and if you went back to edit all the the mistakes in it, it'd be brilliant :)
Wanderingreader chapter 24 . 8/10/2011 honest review...

It seems like I'm reading a summary of a story for this Epilogue.

There is something missing with the way you write...But you see, practice makes perfect.
Wanderingreader chapter 5 . 8/10/2011
Somehow, I'm having the hard time reading one scene to another. The way you write it confused me, not to mention your choice of words...

Also, there are sentences that you need to put a comma.

The story is fine but you still need to edit this or have a Beta-reader edit your story...Just a suggestion.
FamishedNight chapter 24 . 6/1/2011
Awesome story!
The Weatherwitch chapter 24 . 7/20/2010
this was great!

i loved it!

well done :D
Christina Elizabeth chapter 24 . 4/14/2010
It was really good! But some phase were used al lot like "shaking like a leaf". But, that's the only real thing that bothered me. Keep writting!
Lady Katreina chapter 24 . 4/3/2010
Imagine me hugging you.

Thank you so much for this story, it is perfect; everything about it. I think there is nothing to dislike and everything to commend it on. Very cute but deeply cutting; thanks again.
YixieC chapter 24 . 3/19/2010
I love this story!

I knew that they have something to do with gangs and mafia in the beginning but you wrote it in such a way that it makes me want to keep reading to confirm it :)

Love your characters, especially Estelle - how she's not girly and is an amazing mechanic :D

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