I liked it. One thing you do need to work on is the spelling mistakes in your writing that distracts the reader from the story.

Best of Luck,

Sergeant Rock

I like your writing in general, reminds me of Bernard Cornwell and how he writes of the common soldier. Very good then and well done :)

Hope to see more from you, only constructive criticism is I would like to see more of it! Best kind of criticism there :)

Nice work, though the battle scene was a bit short and not very clear, I would have enjoyed it slightly longer.

keep writing.

Nice story, I like it. You might get more reads if you change the word "combact" to the proper "combat" in the summary (: