sweet

At the very least give me some closure. Not ending this will distract me for days to come. XD

A great start!

'More to come'? So where is this more? I'd love for it to be continued!

i've got three words for you: .IT! please keep on updating!

Absolutely beautifully written. Please continue.

Oh, this is good stuff. I hope you haven't abandoned it or anything. Looks like it's been quite a while since your last update...

Well, I hope you post the next chapter soon. You've got a lot of people waiting to read more of this!

- KE

Wonderful story! You really did an amazing job.

This is amazing! I can't wait for more!

Well. I greatly like this story.

I have also derived much enjoyment from the character Alice, who is very much like myself, both in colouring, name, and personality.

I really liked this chapter. It progressed really well. I'm glad to know of Emma's feelings in all of this and I really enjoy her indifference towards thomas. It's really funny actually.

Update soon please!

I love the mixture of fairytale and ton banter in your narrative. It is both comical and touching at times.

I am definitely going to read more of this, I'm very curious as to what will become of Emma.

Yours &c.,

Jean

Nice story, it has comedy, love, a bit a family drama, what more can you ask for...maybe more chapters ?

Update soon!

Ok, this chapter totally confused me. It seemed a little rushed that they're getting along and that Thomas likes to kinda like her and is over Caroline. I thought that was what the story was going to be about, their journey to becoming friends and then lovers, now I'm not so sure where you're going with it. Also, Caroline's character needs a little clarification which I'm sure we'll get later on. It was really well written though and I can't wait to see how the invite writing goes. Oh, and I loved their coy banter towards the end!

Thomas is so oblivious, I hope that doesn't cause too many problems in the future. Caroline is horrible but I was a little disappointed with Emma in this chapter too. I'm glad she was frank with Thomas and basically told him that he wasn't doing her a favor by marrying her because she doesn't want to be married to him either... however, the outright complaining about her mother and sister wasn't in good taste. They're horrible, yes, and Emma seemed to play it off as if it didn't effect her, but to come out and just say it makes her anything but one of those typical sweet characters. I know it wasn't be to be that way, but it came out a bit conniving to me. Other than that, I really enjoyed reading it!