Wow, what a journey! I loved it so much! He managed to get the girl quite quickly after he confessed his feelings...well, he waited for far too long until that confession...9 years! But they are now happy in love :))

Loved it! Thank you!

I feel sorry for Nat right now...but can't help wonder what did he do to make her believe the worst about him?!

Wow, she's leaving him after she hurt him like that. Well, it's his fault for hurting her in the first place and not saying sorry or treating her right afterwards.

He needs to show her he'll treat her right from now on.

I can understand her wanting to cry since she put her name on the line and now she lost credibility!

I wonder why is Nat nervous?! :D

I really don't get how someone can stay friends or even talk to someone who tells them constantly they are nerds, dorks or other words like that. They don't respect you as a person if they do...

I think Nat paid her father's bills. He said that her dad will live a long life...and then miraculously the debts were paid.

Pat...it's still hard to see her game...it's frustrating :))

Nat seems so nice sometimes!

It seems Nat and Andrea were close enough at one point for him to get to know her dad...and Nat saying he loved her for 3 years now...maybe he wasn't kidding...

So Andrea will have to stay now to pay her father's hospital bills...

Bet their transformations will change things in the office...

I can't believe she lets them treat her like that!

She got the job! And she said it's her dream job... :))

Also, I loved devil's secretary but me being me, I got quite confused with the third person omniscient view. Only the parts that had lots of conversation and more than two participants though. Sometimes I couldn't quite tell who the 'she' or the 'he' was. Minor details though. Nat is absolutely ...(sigh of jealously.)

-Lena

i really liked this story but i felt that there wasn't enough about andrea and nat's, past - all the characters really - to understand the characters. i think you're trying to say that nat was a bully - what did he do? how did she respond? why is his relationship with his brother so bad? with his father?

Omg tht was so sweet!

Nat sounds perfect lol altho i dotn relly get it

so everything was all a dream? Or iunno just felt like it wasnt worded propeely in the end

but it still the sweestt story ever

great job :)

.excuse the speeling errors i stayd up all nigt to finish reading this ;P

aw... story is so cute... too bad not many people left comments! it was a good read... good job!

Aw.. this story is so sweet. I don't know why but I feel like crying :D

Not many stories evoke that kind of emotion from me.