|Reviews for My life would be easy if it wasn't for you|
| CuriousContradiction chapter 4 . 8/9/2009
I think this could be made into an even better story if you
- Had correct capitalization in the title
- Didn't have as many grammatical mistakes within the text
- Showed more and told less.
Need help on grammar? Check out the two links in my profile. They help a lot. Good luck!
| GaIn chapter 4 . 8/4/2009
Good start. I'm really liking it so far. :)
| BlakJaq chapter 3 . 7/13/2009
cool. can't wait for the update.